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Laurelle by cocoaspen Laurelle by cocoaspen
acrylic con canvas, 50 x 40 cm.
model: misslaurelle.deviantart.com/

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:iconvictoriadeardum:
you have very good proportions in the human figure, it´s not rigid. Is no original the concept, I thinks you may try new thing on the figure maybe tatoos, other kind of clothes or another background, try out with really definish highlights. The technique is awesome love the strokelines and the freeway they are in canvas. About impact is almost perfect, maybe a little bit of color weight in the uponright side a violet instead green and you gain 100% of balance on composition. Hope you like my critique and if it´s not, let me know please, hope I´m helping you in some way
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:iconsoniamatas:
SoniaMatas Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
Estos colores son brutales, me tienen enamoradísima :love:
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:iconcocoaspen:
cocoaspen Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2015  Professional General Artist
ueeee!
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:icondanibeez:
DaniBeez Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist

Dear Deviant,

 

I have Favourited your deviation because I sincerely think it is worthy of such a title. If you are wondering why this message is so formal-sounding and impersonal in nature, it's because as a past non-DA user, I have been keeping all my favourite Deviations bookmarked in my browser for a couple of years, and I am finally uploading all those deviations unto my current DA profile! So while it is impractical for me to lay down a thoughtful comment for all these collected Deviations at this time, I want you to know that when I first came across your piece, it did (and still does) deserve a note of appreciation. I apologize for not being able to share individual comments at this time: your Deviation deserves it in my opinion!

 

Thanks for reading,

DaniBeez

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:iconcocoaspen:
cocoaspen Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2014  Professional General Artist
:D:D:D:D:D:D thank youuuu!:D
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:icondanibeez:
DaniBeez Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You are so welcome cocoaspen, she's beautiful!
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:iconfrosthaven00:
Frosthaven00 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Love this! Beautiful!
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:iconcocoaspen:
cocoaspen Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2014  Professional General Artist
thank you!!
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:iconjeighdeigh:
jeighdeigh Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
Wonderfully wild color.
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:iconcocoaspen:
cocoaspen Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2014  Professional General Artist
thank you!
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:iconjeighdeigh:
jeighdeigh Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
You are very welcome!
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:icondigitalsaba:
DigitalSaba Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
<3
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:iconsuperpander:
SuperPander Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2014
sexy and playful ; )
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:iconcocoaspen:
cocoaspen Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2014  Professional General Artist
:D:D:D
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:iconraging-akujiki:
raging-akujiki Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014  Professional Filmographer
Very good choice of colours.  I really like the blues.  Great work, mate.
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:iconcocoaspen:
cocoaspen Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014  Professional General Artist
thank you!:D
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:iconfishofglass:
fishofglass Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014
very nice!
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:iconcocoaspen:
cocoaspen Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014  Professional General Artist
thank you!
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:iconshipain:
shipain Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
love the colors
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:iconcocoaspen:
cocoaspen Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014  Professional General Artist
thank you!!
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:iconjmteal:
JMTeal Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Awesome work, recognized her instantly ;P
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:iconcocoaspen:
cocoaspen Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014  Professional General Artist
thank you!!
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:iconteamobrasilxd:
TeAmoBrasilXD Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014
She looks sexy enough to be from Brasil <3
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:icongabrielwillames:
gabrielwillames Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Student Digital Artist
amazing!!!!
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:iconcocoaspen:
cocoaspen Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Professional General Artist
thank you!
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:iconcyrax00:
cyrax00 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014
beautiful work!
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:iconcocoaspen:
cocoaspen Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Professional General Artist
thank you!!
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:iconjojoemmet:
JojoEmmet Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Student Filmographer
Very amazing!
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:iconcocoaspen:
cocoaspen Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Professional General Artist
thank you!
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:iconfuryaze:
FuryAze Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
WOWW amazing *-*
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:iconcocoaspen:
cocoaspen Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Professional General Artist
thank you!!
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:iconjust-a-nomad:
Just-a-Nomad Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Damn I love the use of color. Keep up the good work!
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:iconcocoaspen:
cocoaspen Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Professional General Artist
thank you!!
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:iconlacabezadelcastor:
LaCabezaDelCastor Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Just gorgeous! Cheers!
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:iconcocoaspen:
cocoaspen Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Professional General Artist
thank you!
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RiqueWanderlust Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I liked how the concept of the colours of this painting is, but the left eye just seems off to me... Like bigger and more smokey than the right eye and much closer to the nose compared to the right. Well, correct me if I'm wrong :D
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:iconcocoaspen:
cocoaspen Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Professional General Artist
hmmm...I don't know...maybe xD have you seen the real picture? :P
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:iconriquewanderlust:
RiqueWanderlust Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hmm maybe I saw a different one xD. But this seems familiar haha
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:iconfullerjames:
fullerjames Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014
very nice
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:iconcocoaspen:
cocoaspen Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Professional General Artist
thank you!
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:iconwinrry:
Winrry Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Student Interface Designer
Really beautiful woman and very well done artwork :D Love the colours
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:iconcocoaspen:
cocoaspen Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Professional General Artist
thank you!!
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:iconzennaying:
ZennaYing Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014
beautiful color!
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:iconcocoaspen:
cocoaspen Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Professional General Artist
thank you!
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:iconyptim:
yptim Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014
Excellent.  Great use of space. Excellent balance of colour. It pops. It draws you to the subject's face. Brush strokes are bold bringing the subject to life. Fantastic subject and pose. It's sexy and invites you in. I wouldn't change a thing. I hope you received as much joy from creating this as I do soaking it in! Thank you. Please keep it coming!
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:iconcocoaspen:
cocoaspen Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Professional General Artist
thank you very much!!:D
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:iconvoxeloid:
voxeloid Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
love the colors!
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:iconcocoaspen:
cocoaspen Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Professional General Artist
thank you!!
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:icontommydamninks:
TommyDamnInks Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
I love the palette you choose. Great work, I love it!
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:iconcocoaspen:
cocoaspen Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Professional General Artist
thank you!!
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:iconscorchyz:
Scorchyz Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Student Digital Artist
ugh
gorgeous colors, i can't believe how beautiful that color palette is
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