Laurelle

you have very good proportions in the human figure, it´s not rigid. Is no original the concept, I thinks you may try new thing on the figure maybe tatoos, other kind of clothes or another background, try out with really definish highlights. The technique is awesome love the strokelines and the freeway they are in canvas. About impact is almost perfect, maybe a little bit of color weight in the uponright side a violet instead green and you gain 100% of balance on composition. Hope you like my critique and if it´s not, let me know please, hope I´m helping you in some way